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Dear_JJ Liu_NP1 ,_, Thank_VV0 you_PPY for_IF your_APPGE email_NN1 message_NN1 and_CC request_VV0 to_TO assist_VVI you_PPY in_II correcting_VVG your_APPGE application_NN1 letter_NN1 for_IF the_AT university_NN1 in_II the_AT United_NP1 States_NP1 ._. 
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I_PPIS1 am_VBM glad_JJ that_CST you_PPY have_VH0 included_VVN the_AT draft_NN1 letter_NN1 ._. 
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There_EX are_VBR some_DD very_RG good_JJ points_NN2 in_II your_APPGE letter_NN1 ,_, but_CCB if_CS you_PPY do_VD0 nt_XX mind_VVI ,_, I_PPIS1 will_VM offer_VVI some_DD suggestions_NN2 that_CST may_VM make_VVI the_AT letter_NN1 better_RRR and_CC more_RGR appropriate_JJ for_IF an_AT1 American_JJ university_NN1 ._. 
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First_MD ,_, you_PPY do_VD0 nt_XX need_VVI to_TO begin_VVI your_APPGE letter_NN1 ,_, I_PPIS1 have_VH0 the_AT great_JJ and_CC deep_RR honor_VV0 to_TO apply_VVI to_II your_APPGE illustrious_JJ program_NN1 ,_, filled_VVN as_CSA I_PPIS1 humbly_RR am_RA with_IW the_AT utmost_JJ enthusiasm_NN1 for_IF your_APPGE great_JJ teachers_NN2 and_CC very_RG high_JJ quality_NN1 of_IO study_NN1 in_II the_AT American_JJ way_NN1 ._. 
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I_PPIS1 am_VBM an_AT1 honest_JJ citizen_NN1 and_CC have_VH0 not_XX been_VBN convicted_VVN of_IO any_DD crime_NN1 ,_, nor_CC have_VH0 I_PPIS1 brought_VVN disgrace_NN1 to_II my_APPGE family._NNU You_PPY can_VM be_VBI much_RR more_RGR straightforward_JJ than_CSN the_AT usual_JJ Chinese_JJ pattern_NN1 would_VM allow_VVI you_PPY ._. 
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You_PPY certainly_RR should_VM know_VVI that_CST the_AT university_NN1 understands_VVZ that_CST it_PPH1 has_VHZ an_AT1 illustrious_JJ program_NN1 and_CC therefore_RR does_VDZ nt_XX need_VVI to_TO be_VBI reminded_VVN of_IO that_DD1 information_NN1 ._. 
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You_PPY told_VVD me_PPIO1 that_CST you_PPY do_VD0 nt_XX actually_RR know_VVI any_DD of_IO the_AT university_NN1 programs_NN2 teachers_NN2 or_CC their_APPGE specific_JJ reputations_NN2 ._. 
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Thus_RR this_DD1 statement_NN1 does_VDZ nt_XX particularly_RR make_VVI much_DA1 sense_NN1 ._. 
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I_PPIS1 think_VV0 I_PPIS1 have_VH0 to_TO tell_VVI you_PPY also_RR that_CST you_PPY are_VBR really_RR writing_VVG in_II Chinglish_NN1 ,_, which_DDQ you_PPY should_VM make_VVI every_AT1 effort_NN1 to_TO avoid_VVI in_II this_DD1 application_NN1 letter_NN1 ._. 
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With_IW best_RRT wishes_VVZ for_IF a_AT1 successful_JJ application_NN1 ,_, I_PPIS1 am_VBM yours_PPGE ,_, Michael_NP1 Prosser_NP1 ._. 
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